Mana 'connect the dots'

for contest entry for it was to connect the dots
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its my OC mana. she has her foot in a small small puddle the background is "grass" haha because shes small i did a good job on the reflection in the water huh haha
i see a couple of anatomy fails but its better then usual ha i hope i win this will be my first contest entry i ever did ha